Jumat, 26 September 2014

English task 2 - WRONG PERSON - REVISION

REVISION

      Once, in the city park.....


Ze      : Who is that? so beautiful!

Tiger  : Ah yeah, who is that?

Lin     : Oh, Umm I think that is Swannie, my friend

Ze      : Who is Swannie? Is she beautiful? seems like she is beautiful

Tiger  : yes,yes,yes who is she? from here seems like she is so beautiful

Lin     : Oke, Come on over there, lets walk to there, I'll introduce you and you to her

Ze+Tiger    : Okay!

      Then, they take a walk to the side of lake.


Lin               : Excuse me, isn't you Monnie?

Swannie       : Oh, yes, oh sorry I'm Swanroke, what's going on?

Lin               : Oh, I'm sorry, I'm wrong. I thought you are Swannie

Swannie       : Oh no problem, she just walked away

Lin               : Oh oke, oke let me introduce my self, my name is Lin, nice to meet you

Ze+Tiger       : Ehm ehm ehm

Lin               : Oh yeah, sorry let me introduce two boys beside me, he is Tiger..

Tiger            : Hello I'm Tiger, nice to meet you Swanroke (handshake)

Swannie       : Hello nice to meet you too Tiger

Lin               : Oke stop Tiger, and he is Ze

Ze                : Hello, I'm Ze, You are so beautiful Swannie

Swannie       : Oh, Hello, thank you Ze, nice to meet you Ze~

Ze                : Nice to meet you too

Swannie       : Oh oke, I have to go now, Monnie is waiting for me

Lin               : Oh umm, I have one question for you, are you twin?

Swannie       : Hehe yes we are

Tiger+Ze+Lin : Ooooh

Swannie       : Umm, I have to go now, see you

5 komentar:

  1. hello galuh ^~^)/ i'm the first here~ I wil revise your line "Lion : Oke, Come on over there, lets walk to there, I'll introduce you and you to her" in sentence "I'll introduce you and you to her" you can chane with "I'll introduce both of you to her"

    Good Job Galuh! review mine back at rinintaoktav.blogspot.com

    BalasHapus
  2. aloha galuh^^
    your story like drama actually "sinetron" that i ever seen hehe:D
    but it's great diallogue *aja aja hwaiting

    (visit and put your comments on marlanisa.blogspot.com)

    BalasHapus
  3. good dialogue galuh,,,
    don't forget to visit and put your comment on biyanpurnamasari.blogspot.com

    BalasHapus